Sheila Ray, The Brave (words for said)

Sheila Ray, The Brave
Author:  Kevin Henkes

Possible Common Core Standards:
RL.4.3
W.4.3

How many times have you read a student's story and the word said is used for every conversation?  Use Sheila Ray, The Brave to help your students understand the usage of other words make their writing much more interesting.  First, cover all of the said words in the story with a sticky note with the word said.  Read the story.  Go back through the story page by page removing the sticky notes and logging the word 'substituted' in the story on chart paper.  Talk about how it makes the event interesting.  Ask students to watch for more 'substitute' words for said in other text.  Keep the chart in the room for use when writing.

I like the way Mr. Henkes uses other words yet also uses said in his story.  I think it is important for students to know it is okay to use said....just not every time.  :)

I Heard Said the Bird

I Heard Said the Bird
Author: Polly Berrien Berends

Possible Common Core Standard:
W.4.3

I love using picture books to introduce and reinforce a skill or concept.  I think this book would be a great one to teach using quotation marks.  There's much more that could be taught with this book, but I'm going to focus on quotation marks for dialogue.

First I would read the above mentioned story for some quick story element discussion and simple enjoyment of the story.

Choose one of the videos from the following site to introduce quotation marks after defining dialogue.
http://www.watchknowlearn.org/Video.aspx?VideoID=27230&CategoryID=1568

Display the first page of the story on a document camera.  Ask students to read it to you or with you.  Students should silently look for sentences with dialogue and quotation marks.  Let them know they are going to be asked to share with with a classmate.  After a short time ask them to turn to their shoulder partner.  Taking turns and only identifying one pair of quotation marks students should read each sentence with a pair of quotation marks.  Next ask students to think about what they notice about the quotation marks.  After a short time ask them take turns sharing one idea at a time with their shoulder partner.  Log observations on chart paper.  Add to the list if necessary.  (I want them to notice a new paragraph with each new person talking along with the punctuation order and capitalization.)

Read the second page.  Ask who is talking and how do they know.  Ask students to share with each other their observations about the dialogue and how it is marked. Continue through the story.  (Since the story has already been read in its entirety, I would stop when I felt like the students had the concept making sure I stopped after the page asking the goose and the hare.  This is a good opportunity to talk about why there are no quotation marks on this page.  Instead of reading each page and working through the book, you could select certain pages in the story.)

Depending on the time available and what future time might be available I would either do a quick write that day with an extremely short story about a bird sharing some information with animals using dialogue among the animals or spend a few days developing a story about either a bird or another animal using dialogue.

When students are done writing using quotation marks, they can check their work by copying and pasting it into the following site.  (This a is paid site, however, a sample writing can be submitted for review.)
http://www.grammarly.com/?q=punctuation&gclid=CLLy9tDgwLQCFSemPAodWWwAxw

More information on quotation marks:
http://programs.northlandcollege.edu/owl/Quotation%20mark%20rules.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/quotation.htm
http://www.grammar-monster.com/lessons/quotation_(speech)_marks_punctuation_in_or_out.htm

Website with an activity with this book:
http://isites.harvard.edu/fs/docs/icb.topic1063934.files//I%20Heard%20Said%20the%20Bird.pdf